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Kyra Halland

Strong Women, Honorable Men, Worlds of Magic

Billionaires, Bad Boys, and Bondage, Part 2

8/20/2013

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So, I'm taking a look at the heroes of my novels in comparison to the current hot trend of novels about hot, tormented billionaire hunks who like to play rough. The previous post evaluated them on the Billionaire scale, with Adan Muari from Sarya's Song topping out at 11 (on a scale of 1 to 10), and the others coming in considerably under that. Next up: the twin factors on the Bad Boy scale: Inner Torment and Jackassery.

These two are linked because, in my extensive analysis of the trend (that is, reading lots of reviews, both positive and negative, of books on the "Falling in Love With a Billionaire" list on Goodreads), the male protagonist's past trauma and inner torment are what lead to his extreme narcissistic, hedonistic, selfish, and domineering behavior (aka his jackassery) and provide the excuse, nay, the justification, for any and all such acts. The overall idea is that the sweet young thing he fixates upon as his conquest (female in the examples I've seen, though I suppose this trend could also exist in the M/M romance sector) eventually comes to peace with and/or helps him overcome his inner torment and the accompanying bad behavior.

(Because I'm analyzing Inner Torment and Jackassery separately, this is going to turn into a four-part series. Me and series, it always turns out there has to be one more installment.)

My heroes on the Inner Torment scale (ratings are a function of badness of the stuff they've had to deal with combined with how well they deal with it) (Also, these are the characters as they are at the beginning of the books, more or less. Sometimes things get better, sometimes they get worse, bwahahahaha):

Prince Eruz (Urdaisunia): His father hates him. His brothers hate him. His wives are mad at him, and his concubines aren't too terribly thrilled with him either. His country is falling apart, and he's wrestling with all these inconvenient ideas about equality between the Sazars and the Urdai and how just because you conquered someone doesn't mean it's ok to abuse and oppress them. But Eruz is mostly too busy trying to do his job and figure out how to do what's best for everyone to go all emo over this stuff. And at least his daughter loves him <3 :D
Inner Torment rating: 3
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Sevry (Chosen of Azara): His country was at war from the time he was three until he was twenty-three. After that, his people destroyed and his country in ruins, he spends a very long time on a seemingly hopeless quest to try to restore what was lost. His circumstances keep him isolated, constantly on the run, unable to tell the truth about himself or form close relationships with anyone. He's dedicated to his duty and determined to carry it out, but he's lonely and he's getting pretty tired. He still manages to keep it together, barely.
Inner Torment rating: 7

Roric (The Lost Book of Anggird): Hoo boy. Roric. Wow. I struggled with this novel for years, just not quite sure where Roric was coming from. And then one day he opened up and told me about his past, and I was both horrified by what he'd been through and terrified of writing about it. I thought there was no way I could write about a character with stuff like that in his past. I'm just not qualified (and I'm expecting some pushback for taking on a subject like this when the novel is released). On the other hand, I finally understood why he is the way he is - the accomodations he's come to in his effort to deal with his past and rebuild his life. Once I understood him, the story was much easier to write.
Inner Torment rating: 10. Possibly 11.

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Adan (Sarya's Song): Incredibly rich, good-looking, popular, and talented, from a large and loving family. His father actually expects him to work, as in manual labor, on the family plantations during his visits home, so he knows what hard work is like and he understands, to an extent, what life is like for those less fortunate than him. He's pretty easy-going and content with life, except that as a teenager he did one incredibly thoughtless thing which totally ruined all his chances with the only girl he'll ever love. Not that he's given up hope, though.
Inner Torment rating: 2

Silas (Daughter of the Wildings): As a kid, he made some selfish and thoughtless decisions, which had devastating consequences for someone he cared about. Rather than (or, in addition to) being traumatized by that, he learned from it. Eventually, spurred on by the ideals he came to embrace as a result of that incident, he threw away the wealth and privilege he was born to and chose the life he's living now, and is happy with it.
Inner Torment rating: 2

Conclusion: My guys have all been through bad stuff (and continue to go through it). Some of it only mildly traumatizing, some of it devastating. They do have bad dreams and bad memories and painful, complicated emotions. But life is hard for everyone. Harder for some than for others, but no one is entitled to a bump-free ride through life, so they deal with it and go on as best as they can.

Next time: The Jackassery Index (or, Why in the world do the ladies put up with this $&%@#???)

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Camille LaGuire link
8/21/2013 09:47:37 am

Hmmm. Now this one interests me a lot. Even so, most of my major male leads aren't seriously high on the inner torment, though many of my villains are. (And most of those are in books I haven't published.)

Mick, I would say, is the standout in this category. I would say that he ranks as close to zero on the Inner Torment Scale as a character can get. He has his regrets. Within a story, we see him get pretty down about how things are going. But for the most part, Mick is the most easy going guy in the universe. Very existential. Very zen.

George on the other hand is in a perpetual existential crisis. He is the black sheep of the family, and is himself nothing like the father he greatly admires. Always struggling between pride and disapproval of his own nature and skills. (He's one that would take a couple of chapters to talk about, actually.)

Alex suffers from about the same kind and level of Inner Torment as all young adults. It's all coming-of-age related for him.

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Kyra
8/21/2013 09:58:24 am

Yeah, I see that with Mick. Very mellow, very easygoing. So when something does affect him, it just carries that much more impact.

Silas, now that I think about it, is probably mostly lower than a 2; I put him there because although he's pretty well-adjusted, he's still driven to carry out his ideals and make amends for the bad thing he did as a kid. Then Lainie comes on the scene, and brings up a whole new set of problems.

George's inner crisis sounds like it would provide lots of good, meaningful conflict.

I haven't read the book with Alex in it yet (though I think I have it). If he's about the same age as Lady Pauline, it would be kind of interesting to see interactions between them as it seems to me (from what I've read of her) that she doesn't seem to be afflicted by any kind of Inner Torment and self-doubts at all :D

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